Lalajibhai Sakariya 18 hours ago
Chapara Bhavna 5 days ago

nice story

joshipratik9 2 weeks ago
Kinjal Barfiwala 3 weeks ago
Beena Hirani 3 weeks ago
Kapil Thakar 3 weeks ago
Karishma Desai 3 weeks ago
Gadhvi Aaspar 4 weeks ago
Dipesh Gandhi 1 month ago
Ssb 1 month ago
Swaminarayan 2 months ago
Sonal Shah 2 months ago
Manisha 2 months ago
Krishan Jadav 2 months ago

jabarjast

Chetan Anghan 2 months ago
Kinjal 2 months ago
Kunjal Vayeda 2 months ago
Rashmi Patel 3 months ago
Nimisha 3 months ago
DrUrja Pathak 3 months ago
Ami Modi 4 months ago
Nehal Padariya 4 months ago
JAGDISH.D. JABUANI 4 months ago
Lajj Tanwani 9 months ago
aparna joshi 6 months ago
rathod Jagruti 6 months ago
Trupti Patel 6 months ago

Superb novel pan haju aekad chapter hot to maja aavat end ma kaik khutyu hoy aevu lagyu but Saras Chhe Chhek sudhi jakdi rakhe aevi....

Nilkanth Patel 7 months ago
Janki 7 months ago
Dhruva Joshi 7 months ago
adhuro 8 months ago

Nice Story Bro,But yar puri ho gyi, koi bat nhi ab ek aur isse bhi dumdar story leke aao jaldi we are waiting.

Dhaval Parmar 8 months ago
Shefali 8 months ago
mitali parekh 8 months ago
Chuhan Daxa 8 months ago
Bhavesh Tejani 8 months ago
Harsh Piprotar 8 months ago
Dhaval Patadiya 9 months ago

પ્રેમ અને સુસ્મિતા નું હેપ્પી એન્ડીગ ની કલ્પના કરી હતી .. છતાં પણ ખુબ મજેદાર સ્ટોરી રહી ... આખી સીરીઝ પર પકડ જમાવી રાખી ..

Jaydip Parmar 9 months ago

i think this story needs a more long end...the ending of story should be much longer and should take another part also...you have shown only dangerous part...happiness of ending shold also given..because i expect your pleasant words for happy ending..but

Rajni Dhami 9 months ago
Dixita Patel 9 months ago
Ankit Makwana 9 months ago
PARAG 9 months ago
Saroj Bhagat 9 months ago
Ankita Amit Modi 9 months ago
Arun Sakariya 9 months ago
Ram 9 months ago
chavda geeta 9 months ago
Chhaya 9 months ago
Komal 9 months ago
Jagdish Kathiriya 9 months ago
pinal patel 9 months ago
Anish Charm 9 months ago

ખુબજ સરસ રીતે પાત્રો નો ઉપયોગ કર્યો છે આ વાર્તા માં... દરેક કાલ્પનિક પાત્રો અને તે પાત્રો ને જીવંત કરનાર લેખક પ્રવીણ ભાઈ ને અભિનંદન.

Tejalvachhani 9 months ago
Malti Otia 9 months ago
Kalpana Parmar 9 months ago
Vanraj Bokhiriya 9 months ago
Kirankumar 9 months ago
piyush patel 9 months ago

good lovely story

Kiran Patel 9 months ago
Deboshree Majumdar 9 months ago
Kirti 9 months ago
Gopal S Ahir 9 months ago
Komal 9 months ago
Abhi Shah 9 months ago
Usha Dattani Dattani 9 months ago
nihi honey 9 months ago
Mayur Sutariya 9 months ago
Deepali Trivedi 9 months ago
Heena 9 months ago
Nilesh Ajani 9 months ago
Saiju 9 months ago

Superb... jordar...

Kishan Chikhaliya 9 months ago
Avni 9 months ago
Patel Hiten 9 months ago

khubj sunadr. end sudhi suspension jakdi rakhyu.

Manoj Joshi 9 months ago

જોરદાર....

Anku Patel 9 months ago
Mk Kamini 9 months ago
Kunal Bhatt 9 months ago
Khushi Bhinde 9 months ago

Thank you for this adventure thriller story

Komal 9 months ago